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"Daddy! Daddy! Please please please can we keep him? Please tell me we can keep him this time!" "Ugh... Kid, what's wrong? Do you have any idea how late it is? Couldn't you wait until tomor-- OH FFS YOU AGAIN?! GET OUT! AND STOP HUMPING THAT STUFFED ANIMAL FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!"

"Give it a story"

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Bob is an automaton.

Bob is created by many professors working together.
Bob is created to improve the interaction between man and machine.
Bob was made with a lot of time and effort.
Bob is made of the toughest and heaviest steel.
Bob can speak, care, feel, listen, see, run fast, jump high and even fly.
Bob can support, help and protect.
Bob can be a child, to soften the heart.
Bob can be a hero, to save your life.
Bob will last forever.
Bob will guide you to a brighter future.

Bob has corrupted files.
Bob was created by Father.

Father drinks.
When Father drinks,
Father can't speak. Father can shout.
Father can feel, but does not care.
Father hits Mother.

Father cries at night.

Father works.
Father works at a steel mill.
Father carries the toughest and heaviest steel.
Father has to run fast, jump high.
Father works all day,

Bob is made by father.
Bob is made of a bat, needles, bike parts, many tins.
Bob was made with a lot of time and effort.
Bob is made of steel.
Bob can speak, listen, see, walk, shake hands.
Bob can watch.

Bob does know know why Bob was made.

Father shouts at Bob.
Father hits Bob.

Bobs falls a lot.
Father picks Bob up a lot.

Father is not an automaton.
Father does not last forever.

Father becomes smaller.
Father coughs.
Father coughs a lot.
Father must run fast, jump high.

Father can not run fast.
Father can not jump high.
Father falls.

Father falls a lot.
Bob can watch.

Mother is not here.
Father coughs blood.
Bob can watch.

Father does not shout.
Father does not speak.
Father is silent.
Bob is silent.

Father does not breathe.



Bob is an automaton.



Not exactly how I wanted it when I began and I had to cut it short because I got stuck, but fair enough. You wanted a story, I gave you many sentences following each other up in a more or less logical sense.

The illustration looks good. That rag, both in its shape and existence in the first place, doesn't really make sense. The automaton's design is crude, which is both a flaw and a major part of its charm.

Cheers.

Xephio responds:

Hell dude, that's fantastic. i dig it a lot.
bob felt naked without the rag so it was a last minute thing i added and the fact i suck at drawing cloth shapes explains why it doesnt make sense.
still a great text format, very grim and unsettling

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